heh

i like it

its true...i like how you worded this poem... hmm..the human heart is so weak...easily sucumb to disgusting emotions, like greed and envy...

^^

Awsome.

i still think this is a peice fo work

do you think it could win a competition?

not sure...im not too familiar with poetic competition

okay...cause i want to enter a writing/poetry competition, but i don't know what i should do...

well im not too familiar with it so my opinion isnt very credible..but i would say this has a superior chance..

thanks^^...i'll try...gonna coast me 25$ just to enter, but what ev...

... ya know that seems more of a waste of time, charging you..i mean... no one doesnt have 25$... its like saying you have to give them a penny to enter...

no its like an entry fee, but it goes to the winners, like say you win the grand prize you get 100000$ dllars..so that money needs to come from somewhere^^

..... you get 100000$ for a poetry contest?... jesus christ...

Yep^^ you also get your own publisher and get a free paid trip to New York...lets see...2nd place is 1000$...3rd place is...100$...4th place is 50$...and 5th place is 25 bucks to a bookstore near you...

wtf?? where the hell is this competition being held?? the taj ma hal??? the white house??

no its like the 75th writing competition for the readers digest or something..i don't know, my mom told me about it

oh.. i thought at first you were talking about a scholl poetry competition..

no..i wish...that'd be sweet!